A very competent submission that has a strong house style. The aspirational quality of the magazine is highly appropriate for your target audience. The front cover, contents page and DPS show mature design skills. Your magazine is an impressive submission that demonstrates excellent production planning and design. Well done.
A strong house style throughout, with strong photography which is made through the lighting. The layout of the double page spread is also very good as it is clean cut and clear
the house style throughout the magazine is very clear, on the dps page 2 there is an are where the wording connects and i read this as one (possibly because im stupid) so would advise these were placed slightly further apart, other than this the magazine is easy to read and enjoyable to look at.
A very competent submission that has a strong house style. The aspirational quality of the magazine is highly appropriate for your target audience. The front cover, contents page and DPS show mature design skills. Your magazine is an impressive submission that demonstrates excellent production planning and design. Well done.
ReplyDeleteA strong house style throughout, with strong photography which is made through the lighting. The layout of the double page spread is also very good as it is clean cut and clear
ReplyDeletethe house style throughout the magazine is very clear, on the dps page 2 there is an are where the wording connects and i read this as one (possibly because im stupid) so would advise these were placed slightly further apart, other than this the magazine is easy to read and enjoyable to look at.
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